The mysterious black suit

Posted by Josh McK in Learning | 1 Comment

Is it from star wars? it is a mysterious man in a black suit, over the years he grew older he. He didn’t have any money or he didn’t have a home either, he learnt this special skill he used. He used it to make any electronic turn of and not work ever again. he sold DVDs what he either stole or found and not get arrested. one day he did something really bad, he learned this skill to take someone’s soul to make him stronger and take control of that person to use he became really strong and took over the whole town.

eclipse of the tree dwellers

Posted by George B in Learning | 1 Comment

I was walking through the forest one day, with a friend, when he nudged me and said that “I saw a statue move” , so I replied with “umm no there are no sta…” I stopped there WAS a statue and it WAS moving I ran when I turned around my friend was gone! I stood there wondering where he went until I heard a very girly scream like a dying cow, it was him  I ran until I could  see him, I saw him but he was a statue suddenly, a cold hand grabbed me and dragged me away…

Mysterious Mayhem

Posted by Oliver M in Learning | 1 Comment

This man is as creepy as the darkest woods.  He always knows when people are coming.  He looks like a statue so he can leap out he has no face.  He has a creepy sign next to him and no one understands the language. We should be afraid of him because he is deadly because he gets out of stone mode and attacks people.  The last person who got surprised by him didn’t freak out they kept a cool head and faced the no-faced monster.  The man (who has super powers) turned invisible and ripped his hood off and the cloaked devil vaporised.

The Person!!!!!

Posted by Harvey C in Learning | 2 Comments

The person that I saw was weird and dark so, I walked up to them and asked if they were ok, but in a deep voice she or he said ‘no, ‘.

I had my friends next to me and one of them went home, then I thought  ‘Who ever they are they should not be in my back garden . So first I tried to say ‘ Go  away ,’ but it did not move so then another friend went home and after that I was tempted to go tell my mum and dad.

But I thought if we were afraid he or she would come back, they could just be a teenager  trying to be funny to his friends. So I was not scared but then they started to take off their hood and I saw it was a….

  • He was green.
  • It was a he.
  • He was bold.
  • He looked a bit like this but he was bold.                                                                                                                           .  

100wc Week #11 Prompt

Posted by Mrs Addleton in Learning | Leave a comment

This weeks prompt is a mysterious picture.

Things to think about:

Who is it?
What are they doing there?
Should you be afraid?
What is the climax of your story?

Cant wait to see your blogs this week!  Please see Mrs Addleton if you want to enter the 100 word challenge but don’t have a school blog login.


The mystery

Posted by Josh McK in Learning | 3 Comments

There was a kind little boy who barely know the way round his own house because of short time memory loss. Until one day he discovered this room, with one big pull of the door he slipped and fell on the floor because it was locked, he wondered of into the basement without noticing. he stared at this wooden draw, he was curious what was in it so he slowly opened the draw and there was a bundle of keys, he picked up the one what stood out most, he opened the door and there was a golden treasure chest.

paradise for criminals

Posted by George B in Learning | 4 Comments

As I walked down the ally way I noticed a small dusty door only big enough for a small boy. I could fit through there. so I did. when I went through I saw bags and bags of money I heard talking, talking of stealing and robbery. I was in a den for…CRIMINALS!. “dis is  paradise for criminals! the only problem is when the police come where would we hide it all?” spoke the large criminal “what?” replied the puny criminal ” the money” spoke the large criminal back. I knew I had to escape other wise I could be framed!  and, I don’t think my mum will be happy if I go to prison , I noticed a small warp hole across the room that led to the field at the end of my road , so when the escapes weren’t looking , I made a run for it , well, the criminals noticed , and, I got shot at by a pistol but I managed to doge the slick bullets , it was a swift retreat, but I managed , and got home in time to go to the cinema. But the criminals managed to track me to odean and my dad had to call police and s.w.a.t and the bad guys went to prison.

I just robbed my old house!!!

Posted by Harvey C in Learning | 4 Comments

Image result for cartoon robber at a houseI don’t like my parents so I just robbed them!!!!

When I was younger  they treated me like a baby until I was 19. I was so angry when  I was 19 they and they both had augment  disowned me and throw me out onto the streets and I lived on the street for about 2 seconds, because my mum felt bad.

So now I have my old PS2, XBOX360 and my 65 INCH TV!!!Ops now you probably know I am rich well my parents are anyway, so I am going to try and rob my best thing of all, my mums and dads rings and sell them. But where would I hide it all? I have found places to hide my PS2 and my XBOX360. but what about my 65 INCH TV!!!!!

Ghost city !!! ): …. ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ):

Posted by Elijah H in Learning | 4 Comments

In all the streets, they have uncovered things that no one knows about.  This is a ghost city full of good and evil ghosts.  The good ghosts are trying to stop the bad ghosts and the bad ghosts are trying to rob banks.  However, the money is ghost money and not original money, it is see through for the ghosts to grab hold of.  Good ghost cops lured the robber ghosts into a money trap which is made of gold.  We need to get rid of the bad ghosts and their ghostly money, but where would we hide it all?                                                                                                                                              Thank you for reading this.

The investigator

Posted by Josh McK in Learning | 3 Comments

On Saturday there was a ghost sighting they thought they were nice but… the next day someone went missing.Someone else went missing the other day until loads of people went missing, the whole town was confused.One person called Jake, who was an investigator, was the only one who actually cared about it.He’d knew it had been the ghosts so he looked all over town he couldn’t see anything suspicious he didn’t know what to do so he turned into a ghost by taking a potion and he met the ghosts they showed were the people were and he said that he was burrowing them but he took them back.