A very long time ago there was a nice Prime minister and was very strict. But one day something extraordinary thing happened to her, there were U.F.Os everywhere! It was an alien invasion! She knew what to do, she had to be nice. She hated being nice but it was the only way! The fat and ugly looking Plotinians were going toward her but she held out a packet of rich tea and digestives to have a tea party! the slime was going everywhere but she had time to clean up. The party was over so she saw the aliens out. It was a wild party but it was over!
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Hi Jada,
Your idea of a nice Prime Minister giving out tea and biscuits to aliens made me laugh Jada. I love the way you made it sound as it was a real effort for her to be nice by the way you used the text ‘she knew what she had to do.’ You have made good use of exclamation marks too. I wonder if the Plotinians will be back and whether she might offer them some fruit and vegetables next time?
2 HP
Mrs Addleton