I saw a magic tortoise in a mystical forest it was riding a yellow skateboard. there was two hedgehogs together under a talking tree with pointy twigs. I asked it if it would come home with me that is when it happened “IT SAID YES “a tortoise could not talk. I calmed down and brought him home with me.
The magic tortoise
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Hi Jethro,
Congratulations on publishing your first ever blog. It’s out there for the world to read! Your magical forest with talking trees and animals sounds quite enchanting and it makes me wonder what hedgehogs and tortoises would talk about together. Well done for using all the words (I’ll let you off for using pointy instead of point). I would suggest you have a quick read through to find your missing capital letter and where you should have used ‘were’ instead of ‘was’.
I hope you enjoyed the blogging club and will have a great word to contribute to the groups prompt next week.
Well done,
2 house points
Mrs Addleton