This is my speedy yellow skateboard, together we are best friends. Sometimes he is as slow as a green tortoise, like , STUPIDLY SLOW. We go around the block every day, the skateboard and I both point in the direction of the heat, burning sun!! So we must follow our knew dream and travel around the world on my yellow skateboard…
WOW Rudi, I love the idea of travelling around the world on a yellow skateboard. You have made great use of our 5 words. I like the part where you show your frustration by using capital letters – it looks and sounds like you are shouting. Check the last sentence and think if you should have used ‘knew’ or ‘new’. I wonder how long it will take you and your skateboard to go round the globe and where will you skate too first?
Well done,
2 house points,
Mrs Addleton