Hi my name is Hermione Granger, I’m 11 years old and I have no sisters but I have 1 brother named Ryan and he’s the worst because he always says horrible stuff about me like I’m the sassy queen and that I’m a book worm because I read Hogwarts books. anyway, right now I’m waiting for my brother to come back from holiday with his friend’s mum. I’m having the BEST time without him in my house. my wish is to go to Hogwarts because I’m obsessed with magic but my parents think I’m in my dream. anyway, I got to go know
hope you enjoyed my diary
from Hermione Granger
well done luke walker
You have become a prolific writer Luke; publishing nearly everyday! You’ve incorporated some good features of a diary here. Remember to check you have capital letters to start sentences and the spelling of now. Keep it up,
2 house points
Mrs Addleton