The magical bike

Posted by Grace in 100wc | Tagged | 1 Comment

There once was a bike it was a magical bike .The bike had a mind of its own  .In house number 10 there was a boy called Ben.One day Ben went outside into town for a walk. He saw a  yellow bike  he saw nobody was on it so he got on it.We he got on it the bike teleported to a magical land At first there were no people.Then he went into a castle inside there were magical people .Then he looked at the time it was dinner time so he got in a hot air balloon and off he flew home when Ben got home for dinner he told everyone about the magic bike but nobody believed him.

    

One response to “The magical bike”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Grace, I did enjoy reading your blog when I got home. What an imaginative story you finally came up with. My favourite part was the most descriptive sentence when he teleported to the magical land. It’s always a good idea to read your blog out loud to check it all makes sense and you have all the sentences correct with capital letters and full stops – you might spot a few missing when you read it again.
    I feel sorry for Ben that no one believed him but at least he didn’t miss his dinner!
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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