There once was a bike it was a magical bike .The bike had a mind of its own .In house number 10 there was a boy called Ben.One day Ben went outside into town for a walk. He saw a yellow bike he saw nobody was on it so he got on it.We he got on it the bike teleported to a magical land At first there were no people.Then he went into a castle inside there were magical people .Then he looked at the time it was dinner time so he got in a hot air balloon and off he flew home when Ben got home for dinner he told everyone about the magic bike but nobody believed him.
Hi Grace, I did enjoy reading your blog when I got home. What an imaginative story you finally came up with. My favourite part was the most descriptive sentence when he teleported to the magical land. It’s always a good idea to read your blog out loud to check it all makes sense and you have all the sentences correct with capital letters and full stops – you might spot a few missing when you read it again.
I feel sorry for Ben that no one believed him but at least he didn’t miss his dinner!
3 house points
Mrs Addleton