Hi my name is harry potter, I’m 11 years old. my life is horrible, Firstly my cousin, uncle and aunty are treating me like I’m a rat and Dudley ( my cousin) is punching, kicking and pushing me into my stupid closet and I’m FED UP with it. well it good be worse. Anyway, its my birthday today but something weird is going on. my house( well its not my house, its a sailors house) is shaking and the door is broken. a Hairy big man is sitting in my room ( I have to share with Dudley. Well, right now all he’s saying is ” I haven’t seen you since you were a baby but you’ve got very large, especially round the middle”. but he’s not looking at me, he’s looking at Dudley. Well I hope you enjoyed reading my diary. hope your having fun
from Harry Potter.
Congratulations for publishing a blog Luke. I had fun reading your account of Hagrid meeting Harry. You’ve made great use of punctuation in your blog but do check for capital letters at the start of sentences. I can’t wait to read more from you.
2 house points
Mrs Addleton