…”But where did it go?” she shouted… week 7 100wc

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There was this girl who wanted to get something but she didn’t for her birthday. The girl was called Laura, she was a very temperamental which means moody, irritable or sensitive. so she got mad very fast i mean very fast within 10 seconds she would just get stressy. But that’s just her personality coming through. Laura can be a real pain in the bottom when it comes to calming down. But she had a favourite toy and it was a barbie doll she was petite and cute. One day she lost her favourite Barbie doll and she said ”But where did it go?” Laura shouted….


2 responses to “…”But where did it go?” she shouted… week 7 100wc”

  1. Mrs. G. says:

    I can just imagine the temperamental Laura shouting for her Barbie doll. Thank you for using such vivid word choices in your piece.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Poppie,
    The digital thesaurus has been well thumbed! I love your enthusiasm for finding new synonyms at the moment and you have found some brilliant ones for this blog – I particularly liked the word temperamental. See if you can avoid starting sentences with the word ‘but’ because it is a conjunction which means it is normally used to join to clauses or sentences together.
    Thanks for all your help this week with the sudden influx of new bloggers!
    4 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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