The Abandoned Theatre…

Posted by Clemence in 100wc, Learning | 2 Comments

Creak… slowly the door of the strange building opened as Camille entered. ” It’s s-so cold , ” a little voice spoke from the shadows. Camille screamed in fright.

“Who’s the-there?” she stammered.There was no reply.Suddenly the fireplace on the other side of the dark room lit up.

“It’s so warm,”the voice whispered. Camille looked away as quickly as she could.

” AHHHHHHHH,” she spotted a little girl holding a gum ball at the candy bar.She heard giggles echoing all around the room. Quick as a flash the little girl shoved the sweet in Camilles mouth. She fell,she never woke again because of her…


2 responses to “The Abandoned Theatre…”

  1. Amelia says:

    It is brilliant love it !!

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Clemence,
    I agree with you that the picture had an eerie, abandoned feel to it. You set a creepy scene and used great description to help. I wonder what happened to poor Camille?
    3 HP
    Mrs Addleton

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