The deadly!!!!!trap run!!! Part1

Posted by Robert G in 100wc, Learning | 1 Comment

…Toady I woke up in the in the Sahara desert !!!!! As the pyramid got built I went in to steel the  King then it turned into a trap run for a second I though what is and not deadly.

. Bees

. completeness

. getting told off

then I ran across the trap run But I was exhausted by all the spike traps. finally I got to the king then the guards came out of nowhere!!! As I ran it stared spraying pink bubbles then it fired a bicycle and a empty but poisoned box. Then the  developer appeared  not a fake developer a real devle …

to be contued



One response to “The deadly!!!!!trap run!!! Part1”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Robert,
    This was an action packed piece in true Indiana Jones style; very exciting. I liked your use of the prompts and wonder how an empty poisoned box could be deadly? Don’t forget to check sentences start with a capital letter. I’m looking forward to the next instalment.
    3 HP
    Mrs Addleton

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