my clumbsy day

Posted by Amber in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 4 Comments

so im new to this and i kind of need some help. i thought i might join this club yesterday after i was playing a game and i had a pretty good fighter after a bath with orange soap. my little brother clumbsily fell over me. after i won the game i did a victory dance wich had a back included a backflip.everything that day was SO fun and yet odd. This is the first time I’ve done a vlog and I’m not sure what I’m doing so if anyone has anything that could be of any help or know anybody than let me know.

4 responses to “my clumbsy day”

  1. Bradley says:

    good day bro!!!!!!!

  2. Demi B says:

    wow its amazing

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Amber,
    It was really exciting to have you blogging at playtime and you certainly knocked your first blog out in super quick time. You should find your blog on the 100wc website where adults and children from all around the world might read and choose to comment on it.

    You made a clever story out of the words although next time make sure all 5 are exactly the same; you have used dance instead of danced. Remembering capital letters for the start of sentences and for the word I will also improve your blogging. Note that, unlike Word, the blog will not automatically insert capitals. Victory dances and backflips in the bath would certainly make for an odd but fun type of day!

    I’m really looking forward to reading more quirky blogs from you so please visit us again!

    1 house point
    Mrs Addleton

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