Mr Mack’s library (part 3)

Posted by Atlanta S in 100wc | 3 Comments

“That key doesn’t work … or that one, or that one , or that one ,or that one … UGH THEY DON’T WORK!!!!!!!!!!” Atlanta stressed out.” What do these giant books do?” Abby questioned . Abby wondered off in fascination while Atlanta tried and tried to find the right key, but the thing that she didn’t know that the silver key she kept ,was the right key . Every  key she tried was gold but the key she had left was silver. Atlanta was so busy finding the keys she didn’t notice that Abby wondered off … Abby was dangerous . Abby had wondered off . She was so close that she nearly lost the chance of meeting Mr Mack …

3 responses to “Mr Mack’s library (part 3)”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    More twists and turns, just as I think they are ok, we hear Abby is dangerous. Mmm, how is she dangerous?
    Exciting stuff.

  2. Oli S says:

    I really like the idea of your blog and I can’t wait to see a part 4!
    Keep up the good work, It’s amazing!

    Just REMEMBER to check that it makes sense and that the punctuation is correct or the reader will get confused. But yet again a great blog!

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    Oh Atlanta, I love it, a story in instalments which is keeping me on the edge of my seat and intrigued as to what might happen. I literally gasped at the point you revealed that Abby was dangerous! Will it lead to a battle of the blogs?
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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