The cheeky monkey

Posted by Demi B in 100wc | 2 Comments

One day the cheeky monkey called Bobby was getting some toast and he burned his hand because when he got his toast out he accidentally put his hand in the gap . His mummy called Gemma got him a new laptop to cheer him up . He still needed to go to hospital so he got into his mums car and they drove to the hospital . Once they arrived the monkey gulped and he had butterflies in his tummy . The doctor called him out . His doctor was  a girl  and her name was doctor Ellie and she took him to the room and he sat down on the nice posh chair . Finally his hand felt better because the doctor gave him an injection.  When he got home Bobby’s mummy told him to tidy his room and then he sat down at the table with his laptop and chucked it off because he didn’t want to tidy his room.

2 responses to “The cheeky monkey”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging Demi.
    I loved reading your first blog. It was really well thought through and organised.
    I could really empathise with this poor monkey.
    I look forward to reading your next blog.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    What a superb first blog from you Demi, I know how much time and effort you put into this story and it is brilliant. Well done. You made me feel really compassionate towards that little monkey; I actually gasped aloud when I read that he put his hand into the toaster. I love the way you showed us that he was feeling nervous with those butterflies in his tummy and I felt happy for him that he got to sit on the nice posh chair. I hope his mum doesn’t get too cross with Bobby for not wanting to tidy his room, after all, he has had quite a stressful day!
    I cant wait to read more blogs from you Demi,
    Merry Christmas
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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