one day I went to the zoo and I saw this monkey looking on this apple laptop and I thought was very strange. I went back home to my son which is 7 years of age . I went into my study room to get on my laptop but I saw that monkey again , I really had no idea what to do.
I just tried to engorge him but he kepped on being annoying and made me so angry he smacked me round the face so I called the police and ran off my son got hurt so I called the ambulance.
Gosh Kian- I definitely don’t like the sound of that monkey!
your blog is really good well done
Hi this is William I am 9 and your blog is like an action movie. I hope you don’t visit monkey world there are a lot of monkeys there.
I’m going to read your blogs next year.
Welcome back Kian,
I am very curious as to how the monkey wound up in your house, makes me cringe to think I could be followed home by an angry monkey. Like you I would not know what to do.
You always share very original ideas, however this tale does not feel as complete as most of your writing.
Hi Kian
I can understand why you had no idea what to do, I think I would be pretty confused by a monkey appearing in my house (and a little frightened too!)
I can see why you have made the monkey angry in your story, it was pretty mad in the prompt wasn’t it?
Miss T Team 100wc
Hampshire, England
Hello Kian,
It would be a bit spooky to be followed by a computer obsessed monkey and I don’t think I would know what to do either? Your blog started well but I think you rushed your story a little bit to hit 100 words exactly; it doesn’t matter if you go over! Don’t forget that the past tense of keep is kept – it’s one of those words that doesn’t follow the ‘ed’ rules.
Mrs Addleton
1 house point