My monkey is a bit cheeky and a bit usual. His name is Garry. He loves bananas. But, he doesn’t like computes. Especially. YouTube. He gets angry and throw it of the table and starts to cry. He hats it so much one time he broke his computer .Then, I had to buy a new one so he could lay his games after lunch. He is very funny and never makes the house messy. He has a little monkey called bob and always play with him every day .I like my monkey . H e is so cute and fluffy . I love him
MY monkey
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I think I would like a monkey like Garry, Grace. Well done for bringing him to life so well.
Hello Grace, I think you should use the word sobbing like Joe says. I like reading your blogs. Will you be posting more in 2018?
Good morning Grace,
I really enjoyed reading about such a likeable monkey, who like many of us has occasional computer related outbursts of rage. You have described your characters really well.
I look forward to reading your next blog.
Well Done Grace! Just remember, there’s better adjectives for cry like sobbing! Now I want to get a monkey and buy so much bananas
I love your blog grace it is very good
Hello Grace,
An interesting story with equally interesting descriptions that give your readers a good insight to the characters you are writing about. Slightly spoiled by a few spelling mistakes which I’m sure you would have spotted had you read your piece carefully before publishing it. Nevertheless, a good read, well done!
Hello Grace
You have described your monkey as being quite a likeable character who, like a lot of grown ups I know, suffers from fits of rage because of computers! Your monkey is very lucky to have a patient and understanding owner like you Grace. It’s really important that you read your blog through before you publish so you don’t forget to use capital letters for names and you have made time to check spellings.
Well done Grace,
2 house points
Mrs Addleton