Monkey Work

Posted by Joseph A in 100wc | 6 Comments

WORK OVER! Monkey work is 75 inches wide and 100 inches up. Just about to fit 2 monkeys, one was called Bob, the naughty one! ” OO AA!” ( that’s I hate this computer!) SWING!!! He’s so angry now! He likes Ipods more than computer! He is having a BIG rage and why he’s raging is because yesterday her mother said ” YOU GET ON WITH YOUR HOMEWORK OR THERES NO COMPUTER FOR A WEEK” Yes she is MAD he thought he got despicable correctly but no he didn’t I would be like that if I was the monkey by the way he played busy things.

 

6 responses to “Monkey Work”

  1. Kate Wilson says:

    Hi Joseph. I loved your blog. It was lots of fun to read.

  2. William says:

    Hi this William I am 9 and I like your blogs they are really fun to read. I hope you do more blogs next year.

  3. Mrs Dibben says:

    Good morning Joseph,

    I love the opening, really caught my attention. I would really like to know more about monkey work.
    Like Mrs Addleton I think there are probably a lot of monkeys out there who are told to get their homework sorted or they will lose their computer.
    Keep writing, you are improving every week.

  4. charlie says:

    nice blo0g joe

  5. Andrew Paterson says:

    Hello Joseph,
    I enjoyed reading your blog. You clearly have a very imaginative mind and cleverly combine your thoughts with personal experience to produce an interesting story. I certainly relate to Bob’s fear of being denied use of his computer if he doesn’t do as he is told or fails to maintain his standard of work – we have all experienced that at some time in our lives!
    An enjoyable read Joseph, thank you.

  6. Mrs Addleton says:

    Ooh ah ah – that’s monkey talk that says Hello Joe.
    I am intrigued to find out what ‘monkey work’ is Joe. I think there are a lot of little monkeys out there that get threatened with no computer if they don’t do their homework don’t you? I hope Bob does well in his next spelling test otherwise perhaps he might have his iPod removed for a week as well! Make sure you read your blog out loud to yourself to make sure it all makes sense before you press the ‘submit’ button or better still read it to a fellow blogger. Well done Joe another fascinating story from you.
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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