THE OCCASIONAL OGER

Posted by AmberK in Learning | 1 Comment

This is was not a ornery day in number 12 Hope sat down and said I wish some thing exiting happens today and ,some thing did a big van puled up next door it was weird that some wanted to live in a haunted house then a car puled up out climbed a big green man .I went out to great the man he just pushed passed her without caching her eye up close he looked like a oger well she went back inside and sat down again and rested in the morning she got up had breakfast and got an apple and decided to give next door an apple as well and I dropped it in meat then I dropped it over .

One response to “THE OCCASIONAL OGER”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Amber,
    Hope must be a very brave character if she is living next to a haunted house and was not phased by an ogre moving in next door! I really like the part where you said the ogre ‘passed her without catching her eye.’ Although you made a great start, I got a bit confused at the end of the story – what did you drop over and where? Try using syllables to sound out and spell: or-din-ar-y. I wonder if Hope and the ogre will make friends?
    2HP
    Mrs Addleton

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