slither.cat.o

Posted by George B in 100wc | 2 Comments

I was sleeping at night, but then I woke up, because, I heard a noise, a meow, but it sounded like it came from…the loo. I grasped my card board whacky tube [wacky as in whack you round the head with tube]and went to the loo nothing was there… but then there was a noise as if something¬†was flushing up… something was flushing up… and after I got soaked with water with who knows what In it.. I realised it was a cat but unlike normal cats it had no spine and no spine, oh and did I mention it was whereing a cabookie¬† mask, it looked at me, its two blank eyes stared at me. but as It jumped up to pounce on me I grasped the pipe and ripped it out of its spot I whacked it on the bum, it went down the toilet . I ran to the window. the cat went down the drainpipe.to another house. to another victim…

2 responses to “slither.cat.o”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    Wow George, what an unusual tale. You have a very easy engaging style of writing. I hope there will be another instalment.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Another interesting and original story George, I love the picture you painted of this masked cat being flushed up the toilet, and your description of its blank eyes. Check some of your punctuation, especially capital letters. Your ending left us wanting to read more – a pleasure as ever!
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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