The hand of terror!

Posted by James in 100wc | 5 Comments

The hand of terror. It does not sound very scary but actually it is. It finds you whilst you sleep and when you wake up it goes into a fist and knocks you out. After that, it will drag you to its secret lab and cook you for its dinner. But if you escape then it will find you were ever you hide and eat you there and then. But there is a problem for the hand of terror. It will run and hide from you when you have fire. So make this a tip, the hand of terror is afraid of fire.

5 responses to “The hand of terror!”

  1. Tanvir says:

    Your work is very descriptive.
    I like the ‘wanted’ poster style of writing, it’s very innovative
    Keep it up!

  2. Kate Wilson says:

    Well done James. I like the way you’ve explained to the reader what they have to fear but also how they can stay safe ☺

  3. Andrew Paterson says:

    A very interesting story line which I enjoyed reading. You provided the reader with some excellent description which added to the enjoyment of your tale. If you restrict use of the conjunction ‘but’ it will help you construct sentences that will make your story flow for the reader. Nevertheless, a really good effort. Well done James.

  4. Charlie P says:

    HAY JAMES THIS IS A GOOD BLOG I HOPE FOR MORE

  5. James says:

    Hi James,
    I love your blog and their is nothing I hate nothing about it. I have also read your o0ver blogs and they are also amazing.

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