The Angry Monkey
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Lauren, welcome to the wonderful world of blogging.
This is a great first blog. I loved the twist, when this petulant, childlike monkey, turns out to actually be an adult.
I look forward to reading your next blog.
thank you
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CONGRATULATIONS Lauren on publishing your first blog. I loved this story, particularly the range of emotions the monkey went through, from pride and excitement to possessiveness, frustration and finally rage. The ending really caught me by surprise because I thought it was a child monkey behaving so badly until you mentioned his wife! Don’t forget the past tense of throw is threw (not few which means a small number). I wonder if you have a few monkey games on your computer – they sound like they could be fun. I can’t wait to read more blogs from you.
3 house points.
Mrs Addleton.