Monkey rage

Posted by Atlanta S in 100wc | 5 Comments

Dear diary,

Today my stupid computer stopped working . I hate my work , and the bad thing is that I started today . Tomorrow I have to go to go the apple store to get a new Mack book because I shoved mine off the table . To befare it stopped working so its ok it didn’t  break it technically . I have monkey rage that I hate , I’m a angry monkey don’t forget I was trying to fix it before then it stopped working ( I was trying to get music on it ) and I was starving all I  could think about was food.

5 responses to “Monkey rage”

  1. Kate Wilson says:

    Oh Atlanta, I do hope the monkey finds a more suitable job without computers and with regular snack breaks. Your writing made it very easy to empathise with the monkey. Well done

  2. William says:

    Hi this is a comment from William. Your blogs are really good and I hope you do some more next year.

  3. Andrew Paterson says:

    I too become irritated when my computer won’t work and I’m never too sure if the problem is a technical fault or my stupidity! To that end, I truly related with Monkey’s frustration. A good story, well done Atlanta.

  4. Mrs Dibben says:

    Haha, I loved this blog. I completely understood your frustration when I read the last line. There is nothing worse than trying to get stuff done when your stomach is grumbling.
    Using an informal diary to express the monkey’s viewpoint was inspired.

  5. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Atlanta,
    What an original idea to create a diary entry from the Monkey – I bet it will be the only diary entry in response to this prompt and you made effective use of the informal language we normally associate with diary entries. I am so impressed that you edited your draft which made the end result easy to read and therefore enjoy. I loved the excuses the monkey used to try and convince himself that it wasn’t really his fault. Well done – I love it!
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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