“Hi I’m Alex” this is a strange story about a ogre that moved next door he is loud. Especially when he is sleeping the good thing about him is he does pool party’s he ALWAY’S BREAK’S OUR STUFF. Like our door our wall even my toy’s😁what they are special. One night I snuck inn the OGRE’S HOUSE😎.
Then I saw DIAMOND’S every where I was so amazed. How did he get them then I heard a THUD! What was that I whispered so I ran of.
Hi Jethro,
I certainly wouldn’t that ogre next door to me if he’s loud even whilst sleeping! I can’t imagine much water is left in his pool after one of his pool parties. I think that when you read this out loud you will notice that you have misplaced some of your full stops and new sentences e.g. I would put a full stop here: ‘moved next door. He is loud, especially when he is sleeping. The good thing…..’
I am intrigued where he got all those diamonds from too but it sounds like you won’t be brave enough to ask him.
2HP
Mrs Addleton