When I was visiting my nan for a few days something changed my life I woke up in the night. I peeked in my nan’s room and saw their was fire from her hand’s
THE next day I played with my friend’s and told them what I saw so they came with me then someone flew above us she flew down IT WAS MY NAN! She told me about it I was shocked my hole family were super heroes I asked about my power which was lightning. My friend’s were amazed My nan went to find a villain SHE was using a fire to knock a villain
you used capitals letters in the wrong place
it is good i like it
Hello Jethro,
You sounded incredulous at the fact that your nan was flying above you and your friends by the way you used capital letters and an exclamation mark. I wonder if you can find where you should have used the spellings whole instead of hole and there instead of their? What are you going to do with your new lightning powers?
2HP
Mrs Addleton