It was a strange morning for Bob a strange morning indeed he got up and looked in the mirror and screamed he was a bird a big brown one his mum came up and looked all around and said Bob come out please so Bob came out and fluttered all around and he said I’m sorry mum for all that I’ve done and out came Fox the fair I’ll tern you back if you will give me something to eat so Bob made some pancakes and gave them to Fox and Fox said” nice” I’ll tern you back now and with a wave of her wand and there he stood a boy boy again
Hello Amber,
Another lovely story Amber and more beautiful vocabulary. I really like the way you described Bob fluttering around his mum. Well done for using some inverted commas however I think you forgot to break your blog up into sentences again because there are no full stops. I hope that Bob has learnt his lesson because I dread to think what he might be turned into if he is naughty again!
2HP
Mrs Addleton