It’s been a busy day and I, Jake, I just want to go to bed for once! Every time I go to bed the super, super annoying worms come up and go down MY SHORTS!!!! But when I woke up this morning I had no hands, or arms, or legs and feet. I don’t know what had happened, until I looked at my self. “AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! NO THIS CANT BE I’M NOT A… WORM!!!!!”😱😱.
I was all wet and I can go under ground, “now I know what a worm feels like. Now I think about it, it is pretty cool being a worm. Actually I feel super being a worm…😁.
CHAPTER 2
MY NEW LIFE !!
While I was a worm I discovered I can do new powers…
Hello Rudi,
You have made brilliant use of punctuation in your blog, in particular commas to insert extra information in your opening line and inverted commas – well done. I think that you only need one exclamation mark however because more than one becomes a bit distracting for the reader. I am glad you think it is cool to be a worm because they are actually do have super powers; without them we couldn’t survive. I wonder if you can find out why.
2HP
Mrs Addleton