Fortnight the first video game they thought off. It is unusual for a 7-8 year old children and poised all they talk about is WANT TO COME ROUND MINI AND BRING THE SWICH. Shouting loudly through the head set and mick .
Fred’s mum said” get off that rubbish thing NOW find something to read or play Lego or something.” He said” 2 more hours please, please, please, please.”” NO not at all now get off. B…u…t …b…u…t . ” ” NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNooooooooooooooooooooooooo. “Can I go round Bob’s at lest I will bring my homework.”” Fine.”
But achily do it . Ok I will bye I HAVE MY PHONE BBBBBBBBBBYYYYYYYYYEEEEEE
chapter 3 homework
lets play video games now I will pretend I have done my homework.
Nice job Willow also FORTNITE is my favourite video game!!
really good
Willow,
Good use of direct speech in your blog this week although I wonder if you read your writing through before publishing? If you read your first paragraph I think you might notice some editing so that it makes more sense. Note the spelling of ‘actually’. I wonder if Fred’s mum will find out that he was lying to her and what the consequences will be.
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Mrs Addleton