octopiano

Posted by Noah Tollervy in Learning | 1 Comment

there is a gentle octopus who did piano lessons and was going to be proud of himself because he was going to perform a show.

Just as he was about to perform… he lost his script!

He then had to find his script but when he came on the stage nobody was there to watch it


One response to “octopiano”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    A big congratulations for publishing your first blog Noah! I felt pretty sorry for your brave octopus after building up all the courage it would need to get up and perform. I know you were short on time to get this done in playtime but make sure you check your basic punctuation (capitals and full stops). Also, with these types of prompt, you need to try and use all 5 words in the prompt. I love your title by the way and really look forward to reading more posts from you.
    5 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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