The race

Posted by GraceA in 100wc | Tagged | 1 Comment

One day there was a race and there was 2 animals racing there was a snail and a rabbit .  When it was the day of the race the bunny was in the lead.  Then because the bunny thought the snail was slow it stopped and had a cup of tea.  Then he came back to the race and then he decided to have a good sleep. Then the snail got in the lead when the bunny woke up he heard loud music and then he realised that the snail had won.  He screamed and sprinted to the finish line to find the snail at the finish line dancing like he didn’t care.🐰🐌🏁

One response to “The race”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Grace, this was an entertaining blog and similar to the fable of the hare and the tortoise. Remember that when we are talking about more than one thing we say ‘there were’ rather than ‘there was’. Sounds like the rabbit should have had a cup of coffee to keep him awake! I look forward to reading more of your blogs.
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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