bike and mysterious owner

Posted by Kade in 100wc | 2 Comments

one day a lonely bike got stuck in a tree wheres the owner he must of ran away how did it get so rusty how does it look so old ? was it left in the rain it was horrible a bike like that wow! it could of done a couple tricks  what kind of owner was he or did he leave out in the rain and put it in a tree because he fell of and broke a bone or something because that is a really good bike if it hadn’t had got left in the rain and got  struck by lightning and always got treated badly  were in the world would you  leave a really good bike its terrible he could of sold it to dome one or something not make it grow in the tree and leave it there. 

2 responses to “bike and mysterious owner”

  1. Heidi (Team 100, New Zealand) says:

    Kia ora Zade. I really like how this picture has got you thinking about all the adventures this bike might have had! Well done – I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. Keep up the great writing Zade.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Zade,
    Congratulations on publishing your first blog. You made some good enquiries and observations about this mysterious bike. Don’t forget to break up your writing with sentences using capital letters at the start and full stops at the end. I doubt that bike would fetch much money if anyone tried to sell it now!
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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