“when did it arrive?” I said…

Posted by Poppie in 100wc | 2 Comments

“When did my package arrive” I said to ¬†myself thoughtfully. Why does it have a hole in it? Has something got in to my surprise? I don’t know why my item has gone.SOMEONE HAS STOLEN MY ITEM. I’m so angry grrrrrrrrrrr.I don’t know why someone would steal something from me I’m sweat and innocent.Even though a person might’ve stole my item it’s fine no one knows that so it is a secret. So i have to keep this a big secret ok mind so don’t tell me to tell anyone cuz in need to go to sleep bye so go away. SHOO SHOO.

2 responses to ““when did it arrive?” I said…”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:


    I loved your use of questions and all the contradictions in your tale.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Poppie,
    The start of your blog really drew me in, particularly the way you were pondering over this mystery! I wonder what had been in the package. The ‘shoo, shoo’ at the end was very clever.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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