In the heart of a weird forest there stands a mysterious tree. The tree is covered in dangling branches and … a … bike! The bike is wedged between the gnarled tree. The bike got there from a biker crashing. The creepy part is no one really knows how the crash happened. Some people believe it was magic. Some people just believe it was a tragic accident … Now no one dares go to the tree because it is to scary.
Fantastic to see your first ever blog Amelia, I really enjoyed reading this. I would be apprehensive about approaching the tree after your description. You used some great vocabulary but I wonder if you could make it even more interesting to read by using sentence starters other than ‘the’. I really hope you blog more exciting posts for us to read.
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Mrs Addleton