Once I was riding my huge scooter and I accidently ran into a black swan and other swans attacked me I took the swan to the swan hospital and he had to have a surgery and the doctors did a careful job.Next time i was careful when I was ridding it again.
I RAN INTO A SWAN WITH MY HUGE SCOOTER
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Hello Ryan,
I see you were able to use all five prompt words in your story. Mrs Addleton has given you good advice for your story and was correct about a world wide audience. I am over 17,000 km from your school and have read it.
Keep writing and sharing.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Hi Ryan,
Congratulations on your 100wc blog to be published! Your writing will be published to a world wide audience. I appreciate you rushed to do this during one playtime because you don’t have access to a computer at home but I think, if you read it through carefully, you’ll notice some spelling errors. Don’t worry, we can look at these next week but in the meantime, fingers crossed you get some comments!
5hp
Mrs Addleton