The inavding aeroplane (part 2)

Posted by Osea in Learning | 4 Comments

Ahhhhhhhhhh every  one scream and they saw the Dark scary  creature! A a Creature it really  a creature  ” (I munbled )” hey you  the Dark creature  said! Hii well how are you and how  did you come up to the aeroplane. We have to go the creature  said no way  I’m not going with  you because  your  a horrendous  creature. Let’s just go Now  the creature  said. OK OK I’ll go as I  went with  the horrendous creature but when I saw the creature face but I couldn’t  believe what was under it face…

4 responses to “The inavding aeroplane (part 2)”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Super exciting stuff Osea! I like the word horrendous. Make sure you read it out loud before publishing.
    5 house points,
    Mrs Addleton

  2. Joseph A says:

    Osea I can’t wait until the next post. Just one thing on your bottom line you don’t need the ‘but’ but, this is brilliant, keep it up.

    from Joseph.

  3. Ryan w says:

    I love the start because it is so funny AND A DARK CREATURE

  4. GHH says:

    I love the start because it is so funny AND A DARK CREATURE

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