Hello I am evan and this is my blog all about transport
A transport is basically it is cars
motorbike,planes,
You can go anywhere like gas station,hotels, walking or even driving around or you can drive around
Or aswell you can drive to your nans house or grandads house or mums or dad’s house
Or aswell you can go to the beach like Lepe beach
And theme parks like alton towers or you can drive to parks
But sometime you can cycle or scoot to school
But if it is snowing you can drive to the grass area when there is snow on it and play snowball fight
Hello Evan,
I’m so glad you revisited your blog and added some more. Look at all the fun and useful places we use our cars to get to. Wouldn’t life be very different if, suddenly, we weren’t allowed to use our cars!
Don’t forget to check your blogs for full stops next time – it looks like you forgot this time.
Fingers crossed we get some snow this year but hopefully we all live close enough to parks and the forest so we could walk which would be better for the planet.
5 house points
Mrs Addleton
Hello Evan,
Great to see you were inspired to write a blog. I wonder if you had accidently pressed the submit button because you only made it to 39 words. Although you stated a few facts, it would be more interesting to know your opinions on transport and the impacts it has on the environment. Let me know if this is the blog you want to submit to the world or if you’d like me to release it again for you to edit.
1 house point for your initial effort,
Mrs Addleton