the house

Posted by Lewis M in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 1 Comment

one day on the 31st of October 3 curious kids went trick or treating around the block but there was one house that nobody would go to . Some say that the owner ate his wife and turned into a clown with millions of yellow teeth a red Afro and a pale white face . These 3 children did not believe about the the story so they decided to go to his house. They rang the doorbell and then the door magically opened so the children walked inside. They heard a loud bang so they ran upstairs into the dark.but their other friend got eaten…

One response to “the house”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Great stuff Lewis, I love the way you used ‘some say’ to help build tension in this blog and how you described the children running into the dark to get away. I wonder if you could build more tension by describing how they walked into the house?
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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