Dobby the house elf

Posted by Luke in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 1 Comment

Hello there , my name is dobby the house elf and I work for the Malfoy Manor and I normally enjoy it but I think there making a mess on purpose and I feel angry but sad that I’m working with the worst wizards of any sort but according to legend, I must not quit otherwise I will die but I can be free if somebody gives me clothes because I cant be free without clothes

anyway I need to clean now

from dobby

One response to “Dobby the house elf”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Luke, This would be so much better if you had remembered to use sentences, capital letters (including capital letters for names) and full stops.
    Happy cleaning!
    Mrs Addleton

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