Dumbledore ( the professor )

Posted by Luke in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 1 Comment

Hi, my name is Alex Dumbledore  and i have no sisters and no brothers but one crush named professor Minerva and she’s the strictest teacher just to let you know and i’m the sweetest professor the school has ever known. Right know, i’m clearing Hogwarts for the first years and i cant wait to meet them but i’m really excited to see harry potter because i haven’t seen him since he was a baby and like everybody says he has his mothers eyes.

Anyway i must go now

i hope you go to Hogwarts soon

]from yours Truley

One response to “Dumbledore ( the professor )”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Luke – SENTENCE LENGTH! I think you have so much in your head to write you type it all out and don’t think about the poor reader needing to breath! Check your spelling of ‘now’ – you often put know. I’m sure there’s more to come!
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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