Once there was a horse race going on the field and I was on a horse joined in the race my name was Sophie and my horse is called Rosie and I hopped that I would win the race and I was so excited and my horse was as well. It started in an hour so we had time to eat and drink and get ready for the race. And I went into town and it was Saturday and nothing was open. I’m finally ready to start and we have to race around a big circle and who gets to the finish line that person wins the race
Big congratulations to you Sophie, this is your first published piece! This was an unusual use of the prompt – we have never had a blog about a horse race before. It is hard to write a blog when you are stopping and starting at playtimes but make sure you read it all through before you publish – check for things like sentence length. Remember that doubling a consonant creates a short vowel sound so hopped is hopping on one leg and hoped is when you wish for something. I hope you won the race! I’ll be interested to hear if you’ve ridden a horse yourself in real life.
3 house points
Mrs Addleton