Today is Saturday, and it’s my favourite day because you don’t go to school and the next day you don’t go to school either!!
On Saturday, I go swimming and i like it a lot because I feel free and i enjoy myself a lot. Saturdays are really fun for me because i love to be able to relax because Mondays are boring boring boring!!
My favourite thing to do on Saturday and Sunday is go on a bike ride and in the forest on a walk it’s really fun and enjoyable. When i go to the forest i see horses, ponies and cows. IT’S REALLY FUN!!
I go to Tesco’s afterwards but although it was Saturday nothing was open.
Kia ora from New Zealand, Charlotte! My class and I have just read your story and we agree with the comments that your teacher has made. Always remember to proofread your writing and to follow the instructions so that you can make the most of the prompt.
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Charlotte, your weekends sound like a lot of fun. We are lucky to have a large supermarket on our doorstep which is usually open 24-7 so it would be unusual for it to be closed. This weeks prompt was in the past tense so you needed to introduce a specific Saturday in the past. As an example, you may have written: I normally go to Tesco afterwards but last week, although it was Saturday nothing was open. Remember that I needs a capital letter. Going for a walk or bike ride is one of my favourite things to do as well – we are very lucky to live in the New Forest!
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