Elsa’s birthday

Posted by Izzy P in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 2 Comments

One day in Arendelle, A beautiful princess named Elsa was just about to go to bed when Anna, The queen of Arendelle, came sashaying in to her room. “Elsa,who’s birthday is it tomorrow?” “Mine…” And Anna was like, “Elsa, how on earth are you not excited for you birthday tomorrow? There will be presents-” Elsa interupted her by saying…”Anna, I need a lie down. Goodnight. Anna would not go out so Elsa let her sleep with her. The next Morning, Elsa woke up at 8:00,she usually wakes up at half six so she had a 1 hour and a half lie in! “Elsa, happy birthday…” “(Sleepily) too you…” “No silly it’s not my birthday!” “To meee!” Elsa got on up and went to the living room. She was very shocked because her biggest present was that she could visit the mythical forest and see her bestie, Honey-Spirit and keep the wind,Earth,fire and water spirits calm. The reason she could do this is because she is the fifth spirit, the ice spirit. She was born with mystical ice powers that nobody knew about. Then she took a weeks long trip to the forest and realised what her fathers message about the wall of mist blocking the forest was right, but she went to Atahallen, the sea that can predict the future, and found Nokk, the water spirit and rode to Arendelle, realising there was a giant wave coming to destroy Arendelle from the dam, the bridge that her father built with his team for the people of the forest. She used her powers to build a giant shield and saved Arendelle! The he reason she went to the forest(not on her birthday)Because she had been hearing Queen Idunas voice!( she was her mother) She had a good time, went home, opened her presents, had lunch,played with Gail,the gust of wind is Gail,Anna and Olaf. Then she finally had dinner then went to bed again. Elsa had a really good day!

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2 responses to “Elsa’s birthday”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    What an epic tale Izzy! I would like to find out more about Nokk because I have never heard of an ocean that can predict the future. I think you could improve you’re next blog if it has direct speech in it by making it clearer who is speaking (e.g. adding ‘groaned Elsa’) and using a new line each time a different person starts talking. The bit about Gail made me laugh. It sounded like an exhausting but rewarding birthday for Elsa.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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