That Magic Place

Posted by Amy G in 100wc | 3 Comments

A merry go round, 10 horses, 2 children (Doris and Jamie) and that magic Place.   The place where the horses of the merry go round ran riot and came to life, and when micky mouse made your smile brighter when he smiled at you, when you had anxiety going on the highest rollercoaster. The  girl over there, Ava, frowned and everything changed the horses didn’t run riot, Micky didn’t smile anymore and everything was grey. The horse galloped to Disney Land to be better then Micky, Micky lost his happiness and his ears flopped. Later on that year everyone was happy again. The horses came back and Micky was happy again!


3 responses to “That Magic Place”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    Great writing, I love the idea of the horses becoming as famous as Micky Mouse

  2. teacher says:

    I am so glad everyone was happy again at the end and Mickey Mouse could still make everyones’ smile brighter.

    • Naomi Addleton says:

      Amy, congratulations on publishing your first blog! I am sure the whole world will enjoy reading it as much as I did. Thankyou for being so patient whilst we try to update the settings on our blog so that you can see all the wonderful comments that been left for you.

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