bike up against a tree

Posted by Connor W in 100wc | Tagged | 1 Comment

I saw a bike up against a tree but i didn’t touch it.2 hours later,Tommy (my friend) ran past me when i was examining the bike.Tommy asked me if I was OK and I said I was just seeing what the bike was doing there.Tommy sat with me for a while but he had to go because his mum wanted him home to do his homework

One response to “bike up against a tree”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Connor, your blog was strangely pragmatic. Nothing weird or magical – just two boys contemplating where the bike had come from until the norms of humdrum life (homework) demanded their attention. Good punctuation but maybe an alternative word to said would improve your blog?
    2 house points.
    Mrs Addleton

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