Week 17 100wc

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There was a saffron bike that looked ever so strange whenever people had walked by. When people walked by all of them looked very puzzled to what the bike had done. A collector and also an inventor strolled by the bike, he was thinking to himself ” Shouldn’t I just take it because it’s just sitting there abandoned. ” So the man just took it.

The next day, the inventor thought to make a lemonade dispenser, but he didn’t know how to make it in a time crunch. 5 hours later, the man was fascinated with the mould of the bike he had never seen such mould of a bike before. He started to make the lemonade dispenser…

…It worked and here was the result of the creation…

Image result for lemonade dispenser

2 responses to “Week 17 100wc”

  1. Nicole (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Poppie!
    Great story! I love all the detail you have included and the inclusion of an image is a fantastic idea! Amazing vocabulary has been used and I hope to keep reading more of your stories!

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Poppie, you had brilliant original ideas about the variety of things different types of people would think when they saw this strange bike. I can see that the colour made you think of lemonade and it must have been a very clever inventor to re-mould it into a drinks machine. Hopefully it’s getting a lot more use now! You are consistently choosing interesting vocabulary which makes your blogs fun to read but the best bit was the ending with good use of ellipses and you’ve worked out how to attach images – clever you!
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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