VEHICLE MUSIC CLIMBED FURRY SLOWLY

Posted by Poppie in 100wc | 2 Comments

There was a little girl called Jasmine. She was obsessed with music and her mum and dad were the nicest people in the world but she kept acting like they were nothing to her. The reason why was because she was diagnosed with depression a very severe diagnosis of depression. She got a vehicle(car) for her 17th birthday and climbed out the window as she was very befuddled. When she was a child she got a furry teddy bear as she only got depression when she was 10. The next Morning she felt like rubbish. she walked really slowly and sick every where…

good bye

2 responses to “VEHICLE MUSIC CLIMBED FURRY SLOWLY”

  1. connor w says:

    Very good!!!
    very good word choices.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Poppie, I liked the start of your blog. Perhaps the days when we couldn’t connect to the server meant you ran out of time because the end didn’t seem to link with the start. I’m really enjoying your vocabulary – perhaps I’ll suggest befuddled to some of the Year 3 children.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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