I once met a person called Tommy who thought i was an idiot so i climbed up his giant legs but his legs were to slippery.Tommy played music and he was part of a furry club because he thought he was better than everyone.On Saturday, I called my friend Alex to see if he could train me to drive a vehicle because i wanted to run Tommy over.Alex agreed because i didn’t tell him what i was going to do.Soon Alex got intrigued in what music i was slowly playing so i told him it was rapping but Alex didn’t know what rap is!
What a lovely surprise to see you at blogging Connor! As promised, your blog was a treat to read with a cup of tea when I got home. You had a bizarre mix up of ideas to incorporate the prompt words which made me smile. Two things spring to mind if you wanted to improve your blog: his legs were too slippery (check the homophone) and I is a proper noun so it should be upper case. I loved the word intrigued! I hope to see Tommy safe and sound at school next week
3 house points
Mrs Addleton