i love chocolate

Posted by DylanB in 100wc | Tagged | 1 Comment

My brother hates chocolate but i love it he tried it once but he was sick everywhere my dad tried chocolate  but he was sick everywhere my mum was going to eat chocolate but she didn’t want to try it and went straight upstairs the next day i went to school and told my friends to try it  they all jumped out the window including the teacher so i guess nobody likes chocolate.

One response to “i love chocolate”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Many congratulations on publishing your first blog Dylan. I loved this little ditty about chocolate even though it wasn’t this weeks prompt. Don’t forget to use an upper case I when writing I. Also, I’m not sure I found one full stop which left me quite out of breath by the time I got to the end.
    I have to admit that I felt this way about chocolate after Xmas but it didn’t last long so if you have some spare……..
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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