The strange dream

Posted by Grace in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 4 Comments

Once there was a girl who loved red .She had red cloths and red shoes and even a red dog.Iknow it sounds inpossille but it is not her favourite courlour most favourite was scarlet . One day she went to a town it was a a rosey red town. Even the people in the town were red houses were red shops  she went on plane and she saw the part of a city that wasnt red .It was a mystrey  she went home to see her dog and she was sad .She went on the plane and she looked agian and it wasnt red any more and she woke up and it was a dream

4 responses to “The strange dream”

  1. Poppie says:

    Grace you need to get your spellings correct right click on the mouse then it will come up with enhanced spell check press it then it will auto-correct your words. Next time you do another blog make sure it makes sense. But good effort.

  2. Kathleen Silver says:

    Dear Grace,
    Everything RED! Wow, I would very much miss the colors I am fortunate to be able to see.

    I am wondering about this sentence you wrote, “She went on the plane and she looked again and it wasn’t red anymore and she woke up and it was a dream.” Was the dream that everything was RED or was the dream that everything wasn’t the color red anymore?

    Nice touch with the red font.

    Keep Writing!
    Mrs. Silver
    Team 100WC
    Illinois, USA

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Grace,
    I think I’m seeing red after reading about all the red things in your blog – or perhaps it’s because you cleverly used red font! I’m curious to find out what colour the part of the city was that was not red and why the girl was feeling sad. Try reading your blog out loud to someone before publishing to make sure it all makes sense.
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

  4. Mrs Addleton says:

    I have entered your blog on to this weeks 100 word challenge web site so that people all over the world can read it and perhaps send you a comment! Here are the instructions if you or or family and friends want to see it.

    1) Visit http://www.100wc.net

    2) Next, scroll down to this weeks prompt and click on the blue writing that says ‘click here to continue reading.’ This will bring up a huge list of everyone who has entered across the world this week. They have all written about the same prompt as you!

    3) Find the column that says school. There will be two little grey arrows next to the word school. Click on the little arrows so that there is only one arrow pointing down. This will put all the schools who have entered into alphabetical order. Because Wildground starts with a ‘w’, your blog will be near the bottom of the list. Scroll all the way down until you find your blog.

    Now why don’t you read a blog written by another child somewhere in the world and leave them a surprise comment? Here are the instructions:

    1). Follow steps 1 and 2 above.
    2) Choose a child from the list and click on the their link to open their blog.
    3) Enjoy reading their blog.
    4) Leave a comment for them. Make sure you put 2 or 3 things you like about it and 1 thing that might help them improve it.
    5) REMEMBER, FOR ONLINE SAFETY, ONLY PUT YOUR FIRST NAME ON YOUR COMMENT!

    Have fun and I hope you get lots of comments!
    Mrs Addleton

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