The anoying sister

Posted by Grace in 100wc | Tagged | 2 Comments

 

There was a weird balloon it was called the weird balloon because it was brown.It sounds weird right but there was a boy who liked that balloon.That boy had a little sister who he hated her so much he kicked her it was so bad he went to his room.He never wanted to come down  but he came down for dinner he said to his mum  im sorry. He said to his mum am I still grouned she said just till the end of the day.Next morning she said you can bring a friend so he did they went to the park and then had ice cream.

2 responses to “The anoying sister”

  1. Poppie says:

    Fair play grace you just needed to spell ‘ annoying ‘ it’s spelt like hat but good job with your blogs.
    Poppie B

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Grace, lovely to see you’ve published a blog from home – well done. You almost managed to use all five words; just frightening that you missed. Your story made sense and it was great to see you used full stops this time. I think a brown balloon would be the last colour I would choose unless it was chocolate scented of course. I think your blog could be improved by avoiding the word said so many times. I can’t wait to see you’re next blog.
    3 HP
    Mrs Addleton

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