…Then everything stopped and…

Posted by Poppie in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 1 Comment

When I was printing my homework,with my music blaring and my printer grinding out reams of paper then…something mysterious happened.  Then everything stopped and all around me fell an ominous silence. An unusual twitching in the printer mechanism caught me by surprise; it wasn’t making its usual sound. It was clunking but I didn’t know why. Silently,  a piece of paper slid into the paper tray and on it were some very strange symbols.  Was it some kind of secret code? I tried to decipher what it meant but not all the hieroglyphics were legible.  Before I had time to think, the paper burst into flames and burnt into little samples of ash.

One response to “…Then everything stopped and…”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Poppie,
    I like the way you tried to improve your sentence starters in this blog and was particularly impressed to see you using the synonym site to find alternative words that mean the same thing. You’re hard work paid off because the reader can really feel a sense of foreboding. I’m really looking forward to reading your next blog!
    2 house
    Mrs Addleton

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