Creak… slowly the door of the strange building opened as Camille entered. ” It’s s-so cold , ” a little voice spoke from the shadows. Camille screamed in fright.
“Who’s the-there?” she stammered.There was no reply.Suddenly the fireplace on the other side of the dark room lit up.
“It’s so warm,”the voice whispered. Camille looked away as quickly as she could.
” AHHHHHHHH,” she spotted a little girl holding a gum ball at the candy bar.She heard giggles echoing all around the room. Quick as a flash the little girl shoved the sweet in Camilles mouth. She fell,she never woke again because of her…
It is brilliant love it !!
Hello Clemence,
I agree with you that the picture had an eerie, abandoned feel to it. You set a creepy scene and used great description to help. I wonder what happened to poor Camille?
3 HP
Mrs Addleton